2017年10月5 日雅思考试写作回顾

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大作文:It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people, because people can learn from books, films or the Internet, agree or disagree?

1.本次考试难度适中。

2.整体分析:

Task 1:柱图(五个不同地区城市与农村人口变化)

注意:1.人口变化需要有趋势对比;2.注意时态,看清时间点;3.数据图需要在第二段或者结尾段总结数据的总体特征(overview)

相关表达:

1、It is clear that … was the most/relatively less populated.

2、the population in … was the most

3、the population in … was almost double the equivalent figure for …

3.Task 2 旅游类话题

题目翻译:没必要去其他国家旅游来了解不同的文化习俗,因为这些信息能从书本、电影或者网络获取,你同意还是不同意?

从话题上来说,属于旅游类话题,机经中的旧题,注意论证需要适当展开。

从类型上来说,需要将游客从网络获取相关信息和亲身去体验作对比,注意立场明确,开头段与结尾段观点一致。

从结构上来说,可以通过五段完成写作任务:

开头段:改写题目+个人观点(支持亲身参与国际旅游)

立论段:陈述亲身参与国际旅游的优势

立论段:陈述在家搜索旅游信息的局限

驳论段:陈述利用网络或者其他资源存在的好处

结尾段:重申个人观点

Introduction:

科技的普及确实能让人们足不出户就能了解其他国家。It is true that the growing availability of modern technology makes it easier for people to know more about other parts of the world without travelling to those places themselves.但是在我看来,呆在家(了解其他国家)不是最好的方法, 并且出去旅游能带来无可比拟的好处。In my opinion, however, home stay is not the best alternative, and international travel brings incomparable benefits.

Body 1:

Ts: 一部分原因是因为从书本或者网络获取旅游信息是无法取代现实经历的。This is partly because getting travel information from books or the Internet is no substitute for real-life experiences.

Ss: (游客)和当地居民互动以及分享非虚拟的经历能让他们更准确地体会文化多样性,这些是不能由书本和电影提供的。Spending time with local residents and sharing non-virtual experiences are important parts of learning more precisely about cultural differences that cannot be provided by books or films. 在声音和嗅觉方面的经历也是如此,因为游客在国外会品尝当地美食,这些食物体现出不一样的生活方式。他们也会去欣赏歌剧或者戏剧,这些都需要鼓励游客去到当地,以参与者而不是旁观者的身份参与进去。It is also true in the case of audio or scent experiences. When tourists go to other countries, they would taste local cuisines that show a different lifestyle from their mother country, and they would go to local theatres to enjoy operas or dramas. All these need to encourage tourists to set out and get themselves involved as participants rather than witnesses.

Body 2:

Ts: 除此之外,(我们)也很难保证网络、电影或者书本上的信息都是可信的。Apart from this, it is hard to ensure that all the information from the Internet, films or books is trustworthy.

Ss:网络上的旅游广告或者文章有时候偏商业化或者存在偏见,这种不诚实的做法很容易误导人们并且导致对当地的一些刻板印象。如果书上或者册子上的信息都没有及时更新,这会非常浪费时间并且令人失望。因此,从这些材料获取信息是存在风险的。Travel advertisements or articles from the Internet are sometimes commercialized and biased, a dishonest practice that is easy to mislead people and lead to stereotypes about the host countries, and it would be rather time-wasting and disappointing if tourists find out that the information available from the books or brochures is not up-to-date. Therefore, it takes risks to learn from these materials.

Body 3:

Ts: 尽管如此,从旅游书籍和网络获取信息的明显好处是不能被否认的。In spite of these, the obvious benefits of turning to travel books and the Internet cannot be denied.

Ss:如果人们忙于工作或者学习,这样就能节省很多时间,因为只需要他们几个小时就能参观完一个国家。这样也能节省一笔钱,因为免去了交通和住宿费用。It is time-saving if people are occupied with their work or study, because it takes them only a couple of hours to go around a foreign country. Also, it would save some budgets for tourists because there is no need for transport and accommodation.

Conclusion:

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